Gillian Kee 10/6/2016

Today we focused on topic sentences and thesis. We focused on when to use "You and I" in sentence, the difference between subjective and objective, and when making your writing stronger add more information.
We also started to write a body paragraph for "Sinners", I started my body paragraph today, but did not finish (you can use this as an example):
          In “Sinners in the Hand of an Angry God”, Edwards provokes fear into his audience not to sin because if they do they will be punished. He explains that when you do sin god will punish you in terrible ways,  “O sinner! Consider the fearful danger you are in: it is a great furnace of wrath, a wide and bottomless pit, full of the fire of wrath, that you are held over in the hand of that God, whose wrath is provoked and incensed as much against you, as against many of the damned in hell” (Edwards).  This quote is provoking fear because it is saying that one is held over hell and will be brought closer every time one sins.

Subjective:	Objective
Without bias	The object itself
Person (the one who does things)	“Sinners in the hands of an angry God”
In text- that which views/ analyzes the object	A thing we can break down and analyze
Each subject can see the object as something different

The subject analyzes the object

• You and I(when to use it):
• Don't use these in rhetorical analysis or writing, try to stay objective in your writing.
• DO NOT put your opinion in your Rhetorical writing  
• When making your writing stronger:
• Add more information:
• WHO
• WHAT
• WHERE
• WHEN
• WHY