Justin Rhodes 3/13 blog

Hello class, on Monday in Mr. Rivers class we had recently submitted our best drafts of all time through turnitin.com, and after discussing submission issues and getting through those issues, we moved on with the lesson. On Monday, we discussed transititions that help reinforce relationships, to help revise and make our essays better. Inter paragraphs are the transitions between claims, and are integrated into the topic sentence. Additionally, inter paragraphs establish the logical relationship between the claims of new paragraphs in the essay. Intra paragraphs are the transitions within the claims, and it links the analysis of evidence A to intro of evidence B. It establishes the logical relationship between the examples. The new due date for the essay is still on the table due to back to back snow days, however it will be told soon.